Monday, 29 May 2017

All children should walk to school!!!


 All children should walk to school!!!

At HDS some children walk to school and others go by car or bus.  Most people believe that children should walk to school. I strongly agree that children should walk to school here are some reasons why.

Many articles have been written to support that if children walk to school the air won’t be so  polluted because there won't be as much cars on the road.The Bed ford council says that one less car on the road means less pollution.

Experts in the field say that if children walk to school they will get exercise. The university of Toronto says that children aren't getting enough physical exercise therefore all children should walk to school and get the exercise they need.


Now we can be absolutely very very sure that children should walk to school. When children are walking they are getting as much exercise they need and also there won’t be many cars on the road. There is absolutely no doubt that children should walk to school I think I have fully persuaded you!

This week we have been learning to write an argument using evidence. 

1 comment:

  1. Hena, you are beginning to use persuasive language in your argument. You have used this with great effect. - Mrs T

    ReplyDelete