Sunday, 6 August 2017


The bright sun shone in the bright sky. I saw people smiling, clowns dancing and doing silly tricks making people laugh. People were on rides shouting “fun,fun,fun”.I could smell the sweetness of candy and candyfloss.I heard baby’s crying and teenager’s listening to music. I felt the soft wind in my face making my hair blow back. I felt the soft air slide as I tumbled like a spongy ball.I tasted a delicious and sweet Ice-cream.I drank some juicey juice.

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This week and last week Miss Cathrine taught us how to use the five senses to write a description.

1 comment:

  1. Hena, you have used some lovely descriptive language. Remember to begin your sentences in different ways. - Mrs T